keys to make a good explanation text
good vocab ,good intro, It is about your text, good conclusion, photo or diagram and a bibliography
I Can Explain Why You Need To Shear Your Sheep
Sheep are big wooly animals that produced lamb,mutton and wool how did sheep get hear? well some sheep came hear on the first fleet in 1788.
On the 16 of May 1797 the h.m.s arrived with 33 merino sheep. Sheep require care to avoid death.
Sheep are normally sheared twice a year. Instead of 5 minutes it could take 2 hours. It also could lead to death because if you shear it when it is cold it could freeze to death and if it is too hot it could over heat.
If it rains it could way the sheep down and that means that it could get dehydrated and die.